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The Demon Among Elves by ~Tyrell28:iconTyrell28:



And there he was the son of the noble high elf Tsevrah and the evil Supreme Demon Blood. He had slain his parents moment ago. He ripped off his mother face and scalp put it on his head. Then He put his father's skull on his head and says "we are one".He Chuckled and says "we will alway be together".He jumped to the ceiling to look at his reflection.

I was in a pool of tears because he had killed my parent I turn to look at him with hate but when i look he was gone. I feel a breeze on my neck  and instinctively turn around. I see him he is right in front of me. I fall back afraid for my life. His voice seeming more demonic as he say "Why are you crying  weakling?!" I could not speak, I'm so frighten I could squeak out more than a pathetic "you" "Spit it out or I'll kill you!" he says. To back up his threat grew claws out of his fingers and toe. I scream and cry  before I say "you killed my parents". His claw retract and he say "no i didn't" his sounding child like but familiar. I look down to the ground as I recall the event and say "yes". His make shift mask fals to the floor next my feet. I dd not look at hs face in fear that if we lock eyes he'd kill me.

"I Did Not!" he says. I start getting angry as he says this and say "Oh sure some other half bread killed mine and his parent and just so happens you walk in and put there fces on your head" This is when I look at his face. To my surprise he look just like me. I start to stand as he say "I didn't do it,you did"he pointed at me. Before I can let any words to defend my honor i feel my ears growing. When I go to touch them they are pointy. My hand move to to my forehead as i feel a horn coming out. I move my hands down to see them I see my fingers are claws. I feel a tail and wing sprout out of me.
©2009 ~Tyrell28
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This an unfinished story I've been working on. I wanted everyone opinion to see if i should finish it. It not for people with fetishes

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:iconnybx4life:
Umm.....short so it's a good teaser, but you should at least watch your grammar and spelling.

Aside from that, you should try finishing it.

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The greatest type of dude is one that doesn't give up.

So please, even if you don't get much favs or watches, keep going.
:icontyrell28:
thank you for reading my story. And I know it has some errors in it.I posted it to see if people would be interested in this kind of story. If it has a response wether good or bad I know if I should finish it.

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